After incorporating some private feedback and initial notes from my editor (yes, I hired an editor from Bibliocrunch. His name is Gabe, he’s amazing, and I really wouldn’t consider self-publishing an ebook without having a good editor look at it first), I’ve updated all the chapter posts on this blog to reflect a second draft. I’ve also rearranged most of the chapters so they appear in order and the storylines aren’t confusing. Thanks again for reading and for feedback, and if you have any other comments to add, please let me know!
Oh also, as of the second draft, my novella’s word count is ~17,000. So it should be a quick, entertaining read!